
One day Tim and Joe are sitting at home in France and the phone rang. Tim answered the phone and was on it for a while. When he got off the phone he said that we are going to Regina because there is a science convention. The same thing happens to Jim and Moe. So all four of them went without knowing that all of them are on the same plane.
When they arrived Tim and Joe were already working on their project, Jim and Moe made a plan to destroy Tim and Joe’s project on the plane. It’s been 15 days and all of Jim and Moe’s plans did not work. First they tried to smash it with a hammer, but Moe hit himself with the hammer and he fell asleep for a day. Nothing worked, it was the last day and Tim and Joe’s turn was up. They made the first time portal in the whole world. They even proved it by going back in time and brought one of the judges back. Now it was Jim and Moe’s turn and they did not have anything to show because they were so busy trying to destroy Tim and Joe’s project. So Moe showed the bump on his head to tell the judges that it is painful when you get hit on your head. But they still did not win. When Tim and Joe won they said, “Better luck next time” Jim and Moe said,
“I’m sorry for trying to mess up your time portal.”
The End
By: Jacob
Puplished by: Haley,Sara,Jaxon
3 comments:
Great job Jacob on creating your blog, you used a very neat picture to and you added your picture and your story to the blog. Don't forget to add who the editors are to your story. :)
Fantastic work Jacob! Your story is very creative and I like how you used the name "JOE"! That rocks!
I liked your story because it gave you all the details that you need to know.
I think you can improove on making your stories longer!
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